Tuesday, November 6, 2012

Wishful Thinking

wishes do come true, wishful thinking, wish,
Wishes come true, originally uploaded by ♥Pati.
I’m sitting

on the porch swing,

thinking of how

he and I

used to

sit and swing

together.

The stars are duller

than and old pocketknife.

They used to sparkle

like five-carat diamonds.

I wonder,

is heaven

up in the stars?

Beyond the stars?

Can he see them

like I see them?

Is he wishing?

like I’m wishing?

Read the full poem: Wishful Thinking

18 comments:

  1. awwww, makes me remember of one great love.

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  2. Yay! me too..
    "is he wishing? like I'm wishing?"
    uh! maybe not, because he has somebody to love :(

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  3. It's great to do wishful thinking sometimes hehehe. Very nice poem!

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  4. My daughter used to play the dandelion and tell her to wish..heheheh

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  5. Nice one, Marie. I'd like to think you wrote this one :-) Sino ba kasi yan? Hahahha!

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  6. what a very nice and meaningful poem, you should share who is this person?

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  7. Awww... full of hopeful love. :)

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  8. Libre lang naman ang mangarap, eh sagarin na natin. Sweet thoughs and nice imagery for this poem, bunso. Kanino ka kaya nagmana, hindi naman siguro sa akin, since, hindi ako gaanong at ease sa free verse.

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  9. I love to look at the stars and wonder what's beyond there, I still like the idea of the stories told when I was young and innocent.. not the reality of the moon and mars' appearance,as described by NASA.. :)

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  10. You are maybe so much inspired for you to write such a good poem. I wonder who gave you an inspiration?

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  11. aw this is a very sweet poem. thanks for sharing

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  12. lovely poem. thanks for sharing! :) i used to catch that when i was young and wish, i even shared it to my kids now! hehehe! are you in love little sissy? :)

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  13. soothing and very nice, sweetest as it can be

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  14. Just what I needed for the afternoon. Oh, wishful thinking! Everyday!

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  15. hahaha...no comment..
    ..hmmm..was he at least thinking of me?..hopefully :P!

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